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... Awakened by a splash of cold water, Zachary suddenly knew the type of initial fear felt by the character in Poe's The Pit and the Pendulum. His first rational thought was: who threw the water? He opened his eyes. Though his vision was still blurry, he knew very well the figure that stood over him.

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The musty scent of his clothes and tobacco on his breath made it obvious.

Submitted on April 12, 2013, 9:35 a.m. by AliciaAudrey

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1. The musty scent of his clothes and tobacco on his breath made it obvious.

   Submitted on April 12, 2013, 9:35 a.m. by AliciaAudrey

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2. This seemed to be a day of meeting up with old lovers and old enemies - what would Lilly turn out to be in the end? Lover? Enemy? Or both?

   Submitted on April 12, 2013, 8:13 p.m. by reehannon

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